2018年12月Cet-6（1）写作分析与听读

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance work and leisure. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

How to Balance Work and Leisure

①Just as the old saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy", which illustrates the importance and necessity of keeping a balance between work and leisure. ②However, in today's fast-paced work culture, it's difficult for most people to successfully maintain a good balance between the two.

③As for me, some tips can contribute to achieving the balance. ④First of all, you should develop efficient habits, because only in this way can you squeeze out some leisure time. ⑤It requires you to devote your full attention to the task at hand and complete daily work efficiently. ⑥Second, in order to relieve the fatigue and stress, it's vital to schedule one thing that you are interested in each day and set aside some time for relaxation. ⑦ Last but not least, for those workaholics, please keep in mind that if you work hard, you shouldn't feel guilty when you spend time on personal leisure, for entertainment is also a part of life.

⑧To conclude, work and leisure complement each other, so when you get tired and bored with your daily grind, try to take some time off work to relax yourself.

Introduction（导入）: 格言警句”开篇，这是一个带定语从句的复合句，长句，突出平衡的重要性，必要性。

Body（正文）
1.注意As for me, First of all, second, last but least，最后一段To conclude, 这些表示句子,段落之间逻辑关系的连接词。没有他们，句子即使正确，文章就会显得很突兀。着眼整篇文章逻辑关联词的正确使用，启承转合是英语写作流畅的关键点。
2.注意第7句，相比前面几套作文的句子要长得多。所以长短句的定义也是相对的。本文，第2，4，句也算是长句。与第7句比，可以说只能当作短句。
3. 请问，第7句，有几个从句？

Conclusion（结论）: 一句话就是一段，担当文章下结论的重任— 工作与休息互补，累了， 倦了，要学会把工作或学习丢开，放松好，才能精力充沛再出发。