英语二 大作文 各国汽车在中国市场的份额变

 This is a column/bar chart， clearly illustrating the remarkable/dramatic differences/contrasts/changes in China's/Chinese car market shares/proportions/percentage among Chinese,American and Japaneses brands from 2008 to 2009. During this period, the proportion of Chinese brands increased/ascended significantly/considerably ，reaching/attaining/arriving at approximately 33%. By contrast, the sale/percentage of Japanese brands showed/demonstrated/displayed arriving at a sharp decline/decrease/drop, from 35% to 25%.Meanwhile, the proportion of American brands remained stable at 15%.

这个柱状图，清晰的阐明了2008年和2009年的中、美、日系汽车品牌，在中国汽车市场的份额方面的明显差异。在这一年中，中国品牌份额明显上升�，达到了大约33%，相比之下，日系品牌的销售表现出急剧下降，从35%降至25%。同时，美系品牌的占比稳定在15%

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Such statistics can be associated with the fierce/intense competition in/of Chinese car market, but what resulted in changes above?

上述数据能联想到中国汽车市场的激烈竞争，但是是什么导致了上述变换？

For one thing, in recent years, Chinese automobiles/cars/vehicles were characterized by the lower prices and the improved quality, which attracted a growing number of customers in China to choose and purchase their national brands. （A case in point my family and we bought a BYD as the private car.）

一方面，近年来，中国汽车的突出特征是低价和不错的质量，吸引了中国的消费者选择购买了自己的民族品牌，一个突出的特征是我的家庭购买了比亚迪，作为我们家的私家车

For another， compared with the past years，the relationship/relation between China and Japan became more worse/terrible/serious and a large of Chinese people/citizens/resident did not buy various Japanese products，including cars。So，the sales of Japanese car brands went down/declined/decreased in China。

另一方面，与过去相比，中国和日本的关系变得更加糟糕，因此很大一部分的中国人不再购买包括汽车在内的诸多日本产品。因此，日系品牌汽车在中国的销量就下降了。

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Accordingly,China's /Chinese carmanufactures/produces/makers should pay more attention to the market in domestic market, because of its huge potential . In addition, it is advisable for them to work out comprehensive strategies to improve/enhance the after-sales service. If they do their utmost, the future of China's automobile industry will be hopeful and prosperous.

因此，中国的汽车制造商应该更多关注国内市场。因为其巨大的市场潜力，此外，他们还应该制定综合性的策略来提升其售后服务，如果他们尽了最大努力这么做，中国汽车产业的明天将会充满希望，一片光明。