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Dear Sir or Madam,
As a senior in this/our university who prefers/is fond of/is keen on reading in the spare/free time,I am writing this letter for the purpose of making/offering/proposing/giving suggestions for enhancing/improving/strengthening the service here.
作为本校一名喜欢业余时间在图书馆看书的大四学生,我写信是想要提建议改进这里的服务。
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To begin with/First of all/Above all compare with student's demands/needs/ requirements in learning, the variety and quantity of books are not adequate/inadequate and frequently/often I cannot find the book I want.Thus/Accordingly, it is advisable for you to purchase more latest/new books.What is more/Besides/In addition/Furthermore, because a host of seniors including me are preparing /making preparation for the national entrance examination for postgraduates,it is exceedingly necessary to extend/prolong the opening of reading room where we study.
首先,与学生在学习方面的需求相比,图书馆的图书种类和数量是不足的,我经常找不到自己想要的书,因此,你们应该购买更多的书,此外,因为包括我在内的很多大四学生在准备研究生入学考试。因此,很有必要延长阅览室的开放时间。
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Finally,I on behalf of all students, am quite grateful for your hard work and it is your help that enables us to enjoy the positive atmosphere of learning here/library.
I deem that with our shared efforts, the library service will be improved a lot/greatly/to a large extent.
最后,我代表所有学生,非常感激你们的辛勤工作,正是你们的帮助使我们享受到了图书馆的良好氛围。
. yours sincerely . Li Ming
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