2023年3月四级写作真题朗读与默写1

Directions: Suppose you have taken part in a career planning seminar. Write an account of the seminar and summarize what you have learned from it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
①（复合句）On March 12, 2023, I participated in a career planning seminar, which consisted of three parts-alumni experience sharing, interactive discussions, and a Q & A session.
②（简单句）To begin with, some alumni shared with us their personal experiences about job hunting and offered us some insightful tips on exploring career options.③（简单句）I was quite impressed by one alumnus clear career plan, various hard and soft skills and excellent internship experience.④（复合句）Secondly, the seminar included interactive discussions where employers from various enterprises discussed job trends, which were vital to the success of long-term career planning.⑤（简单句）In the following Q& A session, alumni and employers enthusiastically answered plenty of questions about career planning.
⑥ （简单句）In conclusion, the seminar, to a large extent, has helped me realize the necessity of career planning. ⑦（简单句）Undoubtedly, we should attach great importance to planning our career, acquiring diverse skills, gaining internship experience, and keeping up with the latest job trends. ⑧（简单句）Only in this way can we achieve a long-term career success.
1 首先根据作文题目要求，从总体上介绍参加职业规划研讨会的相关情况。
2 分三点叙述职业规划研讨会三个环节，先介绍校友分享环节。
3 介绍职业规划研讨会的第二个环节- 互动讨论环节。
4介绍职业规划研讨会的第三个环节一问答环节。
5 总结职业规划研讨会给自己带来的帮助。
6进一步指出自己从职业规划研讨会中学到的东西。
7强调所学内容对职业成功的重要作用。
Part One 生词好句
1.participate in 参加，参与 interactive互动的；交互的 job hunting 求职；seminar研讨会；论坛 a Q & A session问答环节 insightful有深刻见解的；career options 职业选择；
personal experiences 个人经历；be impressed by被....给予深刻印象
2.-alumnus 男校友，男毕业生(单数)，alumni （男校友）（ 复数形式）-almumna 女校友，女毕业生（单数），alumnae(女校友) （ 复数形式）
3.consist of 由... 组成
Breakfast consisted of dry bread and a cup of tea.
早餐有无黄油的面包和一杯茶
The performance consisted of dance, music and mime.
演出包括舞蹈、音乐和哑剧。
4.to begin with 首先
To begin with he was Prince Charming.
刚开始他就像是白马王子
He spoke well to begin with, but then started rambling and repeating himself.
开始他说得很好，但是后来开始闲扯，一句话翻来覆去地讲。
5.Only in this way can we...
句型意为“只有这样，我们才能……”，是典型的部分倒装句式，“only+介词短语”置于句首时，句子应采用部分倒装的形式，即“助动词/情态动词+主语+动词原形”的形式。
Only in this way can we survive the hard times in the future to come.
Only in this way can you learn faster and better.
Only in this way can they seize the opportunity to learn a lot from the expert.
Part Two 语篇分析
四级作文一般有8个句子左右。按照Introduction（导入）, body（正文）, conclusion（结论）, 共分三段。
1.Introductin, 第一段是一个复合句，主句，I participated in a career planning seminar,由which引导非限制定语从句，三个并列宾语，形成平时结构，alumni experience sharing, interactive discussions, and a Q & A session
2.Body, 第二段是正文的主题：To begin with后……，2个简单句，Secondly 后…… 一个复合句，主句，the seminar included interactive discussions， 一个定语从句由where引导…….，另一个由which 引导……。特别注意In the following Q& A session, 其实就是thirdly, 但比thirdly 灵活，生动
3.In conclusion, 最后一段，3个简单句，注意第二句Undoubtedly后主句we should attach great importance to planning our career逗号后的3个分词平行结构，acquiring diverse skills ，gaining internship experience, and keeping up with the latest job trends.
Only in this way can we….倒装句，是常用，出彩的句型，要学会使用。
Part Three 写作或翻译时，注意英语“形合”，汉语“意合”的思维特点。
1.英语表达注重“形合”，以形显意，句子结构严谨，主谓长句居多。
2.熟悉英语基础语法，时态，各种从句，倒转句，习惯搭配，通过词汇，语法手段的显性衔接，把松散汉语思维转化成逻辑紧凑，但缺乏弹性的语篇整体。
4.汉语重“意合”，以意驭形，句子结构松散，但“形散神不散”。
5.汉翻英时，汉语原句的主谓未必就是英语的主谓结构，影响英语理解时，要适当调整。