我为什么加入头马

1.One of my friend recommend this platform to me for practise oral English 这一句recommend和oral发音不准，可以查字典校对一下。另外应该用practising 2.he said it's a good place to practise English but not too expensive 这句话语法不通，建议将but not expensive 改成at very low cost

3.I stand here to practise English and Chinese, to learning from others 建议to learning 改成to learn 4.I enjoy in Toastmasters 建议 in 去掉