【对应原书93课】
这课中我们继续来聊聊长难句:
1. 英文中的“长尾”结构
原句回放1:The actual figure was made of copper supported by a metal framework which had been especially constructed by Eiffel.
The actual figure was made of copper / /supported by a metal framework // which had been especially constructed by Eiffel.
如何理解?长尾句理解技巧:______ + ______【听记1】
阅读思维轨迹:
核心信息(主干):The actual figure was made of copper
细节信息1(枝叶):supported by a metal framework
注意:分词后置定语supported by= which was supported
细节信息2(枝叶):which had been especially constructed by Eiffel.
润色译文:雕塑的实体部分是由铜制成,由埃菲尔专门制造的(定语前置)一个金属框架支撑着。
问同学们一个有趣的问题:英文的句子可以写多长?
答案:_________【听记2】
为啥?_________【听记3】
比如:
The actual figure was made of copper / supported by a metal framework / which had been especially constructed by Eiffel,/ who also designed the Eiffel Tower, / the symbol of Paris.
为啥英文多长句,而中文多短句?
我们来试着造个英文句子:
我们来到了一个神秘的城堡。
城堡里住着一位美丽的公主。
她有一个魔镜,这个魔镜可以预测未来。
We arrived at a mysterious castle/ where there was a beautiful princess/ who owned a magic mirror / that could predict the future.
原句回放2:Ever since then, the great monument has been a symbol of liberty for the millions of people who have passed through New York Harbour to make their homes in America.
阅读思维轨迹:
核心信息(主干):Ever since then, the great monument has been a symbol of liberty /
细节信息1(枝叶):for the millions of people /
细节信息2(枝叶):who have passed through New York Harbour to make their homes in America.
润色译文:从那时起,对于千百万穿过纽约港来到美国定居的人们而言,这座雄伟的纪念碑已经成为了自由的象征。
2. 英文中的“长颈鹿句型”
比如,本课中的第三个句子:
The great statue, which was designed by the sculptor Auguste Bartholdi, took ten years to complete.
主干:The great statue took ten years to complete.
细节(“长脖子”):which was designed by the sculptor Auguste Bartholdi
这种句子怎么轻松理解呢?
The great statue (去除which) was designed by the sculptor Auguste Bartholdi.
(补充主语It)took ten years to complete.
好,下面我们一起来造一个长颈鹿句型。
思考:如何用一句英文表达下面两句中文的信息?
1.这个魔镜是公主在森林中捡到的。
2.它告诉公主,一个英俊的王子将在下个月路过这座城堡。
The magic mirror , which was picked up by the princess in the forest, told her that a handsome prince would pass by the castle the following month.
听记答案:
1.断句;脑补
2.理论上可以无限长
3.英语的逻辑是先判断后细节,细节意味着可以无限延伸和补充。
学习了半年,终于学会并写出各种从句。今天写的关于公主这一段居然写对了。
太值得了,这课用心良苦,让我理解高中级用法,300多花的非常值得呀
真的非常感谢东欣老师的用心讲解!
小猫老师?串烧了?
有来学 回复 @江湖胡少侠: 感谢指出,目前音频已经更正过来,上传小伙伴正蹲角落反思~
发错了?
老师PDF在哪里下载了?
小猫老师的课,串烧啦!
有来学 回复 @水沐青漪: 感谢指正,目前已经更正过来了~
对的,又串课了!
有来学 回复 @minmin10: 感谢指正,目前已经更正过来了
音频和内容不一致
有来学 回复 @13908939vmu: 你好,建议刷新一下哦~
没有更正
有来学 回复 @13908939vmu: 你好,音频已经替换过来了,之前已经听的会有缓存,建议退出再重新进入哦