Thanksgiving
Thank You
for all my hands can hold—
apples red, and melons gold,
yellow corn
both ripe and sweet,
peas and beans
so good to eat!
Thank You
for all my eyes can see—
lovely sunlight,
field and tree,
white cloud-boats
in sea-deep sky,
soaring bird and butterfly.
Thank You
for all my ears can hear—
birds’ song echoing
far and near,
songs of little
stream, big sea,
cricket, bullfrog,
duck and bee!
Ivy O. Eastwick
点评:啊,我好喜欢这首的第三小节,歌颂天地间大自然的音乐,从大海小溪,到牛蛙蜜蜂。也好喜欢三个小节按照手可捧,眼可见,耳可闻的架构来写。这种架构,你学到了吗?
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