中考作文范文009

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：theme n.主题； firework n.烟火
Good morning , children !
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland , I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it .
【考点】图表作文．
【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．乐园介绍；上海东部，地铁可达由6个主题公园组成参加活动，欣赏表演购买礼物，观看烟火
2．文明游园；不扔垃圾，保持整洁…
常用到的重点短语：be made up of 由…组成join in 参加such as 例如remember to do sth 记得去做某事in public 公共场所
【高分句型】
1．You can join in different kinds of activities there，such as enjoying wonderful musical or plays．
such as表示例如，给出事例．
2．①However，②it's important to behave well in the park．
3．①Littering②isn't allowed．
①动名词做主语谓语动词用单数．
②一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词．
Good morning，children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland，I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it．
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai．You can get there by underground．It's made up of six theme parks．You can join in different kinds of activities there，such as enjoying wonderful musical or plays．【高分句型】Also，there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose．At night，you can watch fireworks．（乐园介绍）
However，it's important to behave well in the park．【高分句型】Littering isn't allowed．【高分句型】（不扔垃圾）You should keep the park clean．（保持整洁）Remember to wait for your turn anytime．（排队等候）Moreover，it's impolite to shout loudly in public．（不要大声喧哗）The park is worth your visit．I hope you will have fun．