详解BEC-higher写作part one-band5范文真题集3,test3

Part one 图表描述Band 5范文，重点模仿学习
P64真题集3-Test 3-Part One-Question 1

The aim of this report is to show the company’s result in the years 2001-2003.

In 2001, the company’s operating profit peaked at $500 million and it’s turnover reached $600 million as well. The whole year the sold 10 million units, which says it was a dramatic year.

In the following year, the company had to handle a huge decrease in operating profits of 20% and a decline and their turnover of almost $1million. It was perhaps because of the less units sold.

In 2003, the company was able to deliver more units again, which was nearly $15million. Their turnover, therefore, could jump at the same level of 2001. It was disappointing that their operating profits still went down, because they had to meet more marketing expenses.

TIPS:
1,三段是最佳分段(1+3,即一个主题段+三个主体描述段) ，3 sentences and 3 paragraphs
2,注意句间逻辑和段间逻辑之音的连接词（connectors/verbal map）
3, 句型和词汇使用的多样化

句型：（connectors）
While woman showed a steady increase, male smokers dropped sharply after 1980, but began a steady increase again after 1990.

句型：（connectors）
In contrast, however, university graduates eared far form than school leavers.

句型：（connectors）
There are slight drop to 90, which led to a more marked decline to 50.

句型：（connectors）
From the diagraph it can be safely concluded that in the years 1978-1987 Florida developed much more rapidly than the United States as a whole.

句型：（trend）
The three graphs provide an overview of the types of music people purchase in the UK.

句型：（trend）
The general trend is that the mount of TV watched increases with age.

句型：（trend）
There was a dramatic increase in 1970, in the number of university graduates.

句型：（trend）
Three years later , in 1996, both countries saw a marked increase.

句型：（trend）
People holding a Bachelor’s degree only managed a modest increase of $5 per week, reaching a level of $145 in 1995.

句型：（trend）
After that, it rose gradually to 5,000, and then continued its upward trend more steeply to 15,000.