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考题回忆：

It is expected that there will be ahigher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in thefuture. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

题目大意：

预计很多国家未来将有比年轻人更大比率的老年人口，你认为这是一个积极还是消极的发展?

思路：

思路一：完全消极，一方面会在经济方面给年轻人和整个社会体系带来巨大负担，另一方面会在社会资源方面产生过度的使用。

思路二：完全消极，一方面会在社会角度产生经济低迷和资源过度使用的问题，另一方面会在居民方面产生年轻人压力过大，和老年人生活福利下降的问题。

思路三：纵然消极，但也有积极成分，一方面消极同上，另一方面，可能会在医疗或很多全新行业中获得发展，以产生更加适合于老龄社会的多样化的社会形态。

关键词：

ahigher proportion of older people than young people老龄化的产生，题目重点

apositive or negative development要注意用发展的眼光看问题，突出推理过程的动态性。

提纲：

本范文按思路中的第一种进行写作，以便于大多数考生进行参考

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I wouldcertainly believe that the ageing trend would be negatively linked with thedevelopment of the overwhelming countries in both financial and resourcerespects.

Financialproblems may be the top concern of the entire society facing the proliferationof the greying populations. Directly, there is no doubt that government wouldexperience a hard period with economic burdens when allocating more monetaryflows on the pensions of the old generation. Wealth of a particular socialsystem mainly comes from the contributions of adults, and it is also the sourceof almost every actions of the macro manipulations-medical cares, subsidies,poverty alleviations, investments on transports and other infrastructures-bymeans of the governmental taxes or social security schemes. Once the populationof the senior sectors increases accompanied by lower fertilities, as well as asmaller share of younger age groups, financial outputs may be largely pouredinto the ageing-related social security system, which would directly reflect inthe higher burden of those young generations, since they have to work harder onmaking this economic balance. Furthermore, ageing problems also give rise to aless powerful production to the whole society notwithstanding the policy ofdelaying the retirement in some nations, since the seniors may overwhelminglybe lack of the same degree of energy and learning abilities as the prime oflife to catch up with the speedy paces of the social advancement. This wouldsomewhat lead to a shrinked economy of a certain society.

Resources are also a serious problem beingimpacted by the elderly growth. On the one hand, they may dominate certaininfrastructures or basic assets which are supposed to be balanced to all agegroups. Medical cares would definitely lean to those physical weaklingsresulted from their ageing, since they are more likely to be stuck inage-related diseases. Therefore, a scenario of a long waiting line queuing inthe lobby of the hospital, in which the majority is the seniors, will be hardlystrange in any city. This would provoke a lopsided life in the curative area,because more physicians are needed for the clinical majors regarding to theageing issues, or even may become the obstacle of other medical disciplines.Whilst the surroundings may be forced into a different adoption, beingconstrained by the elderly. It is hardly far-fetched that when facilities,equipments or devices of the entire society are oriented to a “senior-friendly”direction, along which modern technologies are highly precluded, fashion looksare not favored, and exciting elements are totally prohibited since they maynot be adaptable or or tolerable by the ageings, the condition of the societywould develop a strange pattern.

In conclusion, adverse effects emergeparticularly on economy and social advance if larger proportion of elderly isoverwhelming the younger populations.

相关词汇：

Proliferation 激增

Greying population 老年人

Monetary 财政的，货币的

Pension 养老金

Macro manipulation 宏观调控

Subsidy 补助金

Poverty alleviation 扶贫

Social security scheme 社会保障体系

Fertility 生育

Notwithstanding 即便

Prime of life 壮年

Shrink 缩水

Lean 倾斜

Physical weakling 体弱多病者

Lopside 不平衡

Clinical 临床的

Prohibit 禁止

句型：

...may be the top concern of theentire society facing the在社会面对...的问题时...可能是最主要的问题

It is hardly far-fetched that不难想象

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