试听180秒【写作】07- How to Write a "Discuss" essay “讨论”类命题的文章创作

07.How to Write a "Discuss" essay“讨论”类命题的文章创作

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大作文四项评分标准：

⑴第一项TR，它叫做Task response

⑵第二项CC，Coherence and Cohesion

⑶第三项GRA，Grammatical Range & Accuracy

⑷第四项LR，Lexical Resource

⒈题目中会给出两个观点，一般来说这两个观点的方向相反

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（30%）

⒉完成两个部分的任务：讨论双方观点+ 给出你的个人意见

⒊讨论双方的意思就是顺着题目所给观点进行扩展。TS是现成的，这是很有利的一种题型

⒋给出个人观点的时候尽可能要体现AB两者之间的关系：弱强偏向，缺一不可共存，非常罕见会使用”取决于”

⒌个人观点可以出现在介绍段，也可以等到最后一段再给出来

Some people think that robots are very important to humans' future development, but others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the past decades, the development of artificial intelligence has been the core of scientific research. The argument over whether advanced robots are beneficial for human’s future or harmful to the society has not been settled yet.—开放式介绍段

On the one hand, there have been concerns as to potential risks posed by robots. Firstly, with the increasing popularity of employing robotic workers showing immeasurably higher productivity and accuracy, their human counterparts will be made redundant (will be shoved aside), becoming jobless and unable to support themselves and their family. As a result, the jobless may resort to crimes to make a living. Another danger of robots, even though mostly seen in fiction books and films, is that they may become smarter than their inventors. The earth would be eventually ruled by highly intelligent machines, with human beings becoming endangered and threatened.

On the other hand, from the perspective of some scientists and sociologists, there will be a better future for humans if advances in robotic technology continue. For example, self-driving cars will be playing a dominant role in transport, as many countries are faced with the trend of aging population which will lead to a severe lack of qualified drivers. Without those computer-based vehicles, it would be extremely difficult for most people to commute in the future. Another advantage of artificial intelligence is that robots can be sent into space or the deep ocean that human beings are impossible to reach for probing or sample collection, results of which will contribute to making breakthroughs in various fields.

In my opinion, we should be cautiously optimistic that automated machines would become great helpers for human race in the future, while acknowledging that we need to determine strict boundaries for how and where they should be utilised.