144 自我介绍(学员示范)

144 自我介绍(学员示范)

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Red 的原文

My name is Wang Yi-yang, and my English name is Red. I come from China, I participate in this work and travel program for many reasons. First of all, I would like to broaden my horizons, to see the world outside and experience the different cultures and customs. Second if I can successfully come to USA and work for a few month, I will get a very valuable oversea experience. This experience will be very helpful for me in the future. Third, as we know, the USA is a very beautiful country, everybody wants to travel there and me too. After I finish my job, I’ll take some time to travel around. I would like to go to Las Vegas and Los Angeles. My friend told me that these two cities are particularly awesome. About my work experience, I used to work in the Apple shop for two summer vacations. That was 2008 and 2009 mainly to introduce and sell Apple products to the customers. Last summer I worked on a music radio, mainly to choose the songs that played on the radio and this summer vacation, I hope that I can work in the USA. That must be cool and interesting. I have a lot of hobbies such like sports especially soccer and reading, movie and music. Well, this is my basic information. I hope to see you soon. Bye-bye.

经过Mr. Wong修改的正确版

My name is Wang Yi-yang, and my English name is Red. I come from China and I am participating in this work and travel program for many reasons. First of all, I would like to broaden my horizons, to see the outside world and experience different cultures and customs. Second if I can successfully go to the USA and work for a few monthsit will be very valuable overseas experience. This experience will be very helpful for me in the future. Third, as we know, the USA is a very beautiful country and everybody wants to travel thereincluding myself. After I finish my job, I’ll take some time to travel around. I would like to go to Las Vegas and Los Angeles. My friend told me that these two cities are particularly awesome. About/in regards to my work experience, I worked in the Apple shop for two summer vacations. That was in 2008 and 2009, mainly to introduce and sell Apple products to customers. Last summer I worked at a radio station, mainly to choose the songs that were played on the radio showX This summer vacation, I hope that I can work in the USA that would be cool and interesting. I have a lot of hobbies such as sports, especially soccerI also enjoy reading, movie and music. Well, this is my basic information. I hope to see you soon. Bye-bye.
总结:
非常清晰的呈现,虽有一些语法的错误但是不影响理解,非常好!


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用户评论
  • Banana小朋友

    老师...多余话可适当删一点

    学英语环游世界 回复 @Banana小朋友: 有些话是说给有缘人听的~ 可以快转~

  • 听友16332614

    Lily老师真的很用心

  • magic_

  • 透明的海域

    找不到141 142

    1526315xjvm 回复 @透明的海域: 我也是

  • 透明的海域

    声音语速正好 太快了会让人觉得跟不上

  • 天涯倦客_6j

    好多废话

  • 听友136650483

    老师的语速好慢,中文也好慢,然后加了倍速,感觉好奇怪,毕竟声音比较台湾腔

  • 听友32121255

    讲得好详细,慢慢消化,受益匪浅

  • Lindazhu666

    lily老师,觉得声音的量不一致,有的节目高,有的节目低,需要调整耳机音量。不过,随着时间感觉到老师的录音质量越来越高了

  • 子墨君

    好节目