帮忙翻译一下,谢谢

On the sample, you would like us to do according to your drawing it?
In fact, if I have the kind of control, we can do in this area more precisely.

Concerning the sample, do you want us to do it on the basis of your drawing?
In fact, we can do it more accurately if we have the material for consulting.

楼主翻译的基本正确，只是语法上错了几处，如we应该是做宾语，所以要用us， 第二句we can do it 后面不能直接接一个句子，而是应该用副词来修饰do,即做的怎么样。还有楼主应该多注意冠词the。名词前一般都要有。