by the improve of society, more and more people(填题目 比方说越来越多学生做兼职)some people claim that(正方idea),other people claim that (反方idea),but/and I think(正方或反方)is much more better.
By the way, (自己idea, 比方students can improve themselves by ……); however(写缺点).
All in all, I think (自己idea) is better, because this is the trend of the society.